CO Potter

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BionicleManF
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CO Potter

Postby BionicleManF » Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:08 am

:os: Potter :os:

Potter is well trained in medical and excels at it in warfare, he trains all his units in medical and uses his survivability to win the battle.

He gets along with all well behaved COs

his is old, about 6 feet, white short hair, and wears stranded greenish officer uniform with a cylindrical cap.

:hit: stitching a soldier
:miss: shooting a soldier

His units do 20% less damage but can take 20% more hits before going down. Healing gives 3 units instead of 2. APCs can heal 1 if suplying infantry.

:power: powerup
:smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar:
Adrenalin shot
All units can move 1 space further and take 20% less damage

:super: SuperPower
:smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar: :bigstar: :bigstar: :bigstar: :bigstar: :bigstar:
Perfect Adrenalin
All units can move 2 spaces further, do 10% more damage, take 20% less damage and are healed by 3.

(If you watch M*A*S*H, you know who this is XD)
Last edited by BionicleManF on Sat Jun 12, 2010 12:44 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Sniffit II
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Re: CO Potter

Postby Sniffit II » Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:04 pm

Seems interesting (and I'd quite like to test it, although I'm not one who can look at something and go: Yeah, seems balanced or not), however, one comment: don't you mean 6'? Six inches is pretty short.
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BionicleManF
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Re: CO Potter

Postby BionicleManF » Sat Jun 12, 2010 5:56 am

oops! ya
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fixed!
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kiwi

Re: CO Potter

Postby kiwi » Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:01 am

4/9
80/120 +1 repairs APCs repair infs 1
90/150 +1 move
100/150 +2 move +3 HP

is that right

'cause that looks kinda meh

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BionicleManF
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Re: CO Potter

Postby BionicleManF » Sat Jun 12, 2010 6:52 am

I, guess?
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Airnike
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Re: CO Potter

Postby Airnike » Fri Aug 06, 2010 2:09 am

BionicleManF wrote::os: Potter :os:
Potter is well trained in medical and excels at it in warfare, he trains all his units in medical and uses his survivability to win the battle.
He gets along with all well behaved COs
his is old, about 6 feet, white short hair, and wears stranded greenish officer uniform with a cylindrical cap.

:hit: stitching a soldier
:miss: shooting a soldier

His units do 20% less damage but can take 20% more hits before going down. Healing gives 3 units instead of 2. APCs can heal 1 if suplying infantry.
:power: powerup
:smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar:
Adrenalin shot
All units can move 1 space further and take 20% less damage
:super: SuperPower
:smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar: :smallstar: :bigstar: :bigstar: :bigstar: :bigstar: :bigstar:
Perfect Adrenalin
All units can move 2 spaces further, do 10% more damage, take 20% less damage and are healed by 3.

(If you watch M*A*S*H, you know who this is XD)


OK, I read word-to-word and I'll try to get you a correct rate without being too harsh or too nice. Since I don't know you, it's OK.
No CO Theme? Well, since I don't even know M*A*S*H, I don't know who this is. Problem.
So, the name. Nothing to link him with by now except his abilities so... Let me give you the 3 average points...
No bio and no quote? Bitter and fade to me. Next.
So, let's watch the stats... Not easy to understand, nor to balance if I got it well. 100/120, Rachel repairings, APCs healing like BBoats and 20% damage retired. You got both Kanbei and Sonja's problems. Far too many effects and unbalanced on top of that.
I'd recommend more 90/110 with Rachel repairs and nothing else... I think it's better like that...
Now for the powers...

:power: 4 stars and... +1 movement, and damage reduction 20%! If that means retiring 2 damage to every fight in which you take damage, think again. You know this would be waaay too powerful. If it's "just" +20% defense, it's too powerful again. Explain yourself and give more pertinent bonuses.
For 4 stars, you could just get, what, 1 movement and nothing more than 10% defense on top of it.

:super: 9 stars for +2 movement, inflicting 10% more damage and receiving 20% less... Well, if you take it as +2 movement, +10/+20, I'm OK.
But if it is really as you just wrote, you will really have to think once again, because even for 9 stars, it would be waaay overpowered.

His day-to-day allows him easy captures (defense=150), but his total lack of offense and his super defense make his power charge even slower than Sturm's.

So, time for the real rate!

Name: 3/5 I don't really know anything I could say...
Bio and Background: 2/10 You didn't even say anything... except he's an expert in medicals.
Quotes: 0/5 No quote, no point.

Skills: 3/30 Too badly described, and in any outcome you get Sonja's and Kanbei's diseases...
CO Gauge: 8/10 Good. But far from perfect seeing your CO Powers...
CO Power: 5/20 A little 5 for the imagination of the "takes 20% less damage". Nothing else.
Super CO Power: 4/20 Same problem, except you did it on both sides of increasing your damage and decreasing the enemy damage by terrible amounts...

Total: 25/100 :c:-rank. It's baaad to give a rate that low. But the thing is your CO has too many features on top of overpowered CO Powers.

I wish you good luck for balance.
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